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Re: Precious Memories
Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2015 8:56 pm
by Crystal
Leon Karnak is the name of the tower Leon was sealed in. I can see how it would seem that way.
Maybe it's just my writing skills not being that great but I still can't see what's wrong with it. D:
Re: Precious Memories
Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2015 11:19 pm
by Robin
Oh ok! I didn't know anything about the tower (never played Rune Factory games), so I was like "wtf is Leon Karnak? First name, last name?" XD sorry about the confusion on my part! :P
Maybe phrase it like "A man once sealed in the Leon Karnak tower" or something, make it clearer for those of us who have no knowledge of the RF series? ^_^
Re: Precious Memories
Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 2:53 pm
by Crystal
Yeah I may have to rewrite those. I used the descriptions directly from the game so I guess it could be confusing to those who have never played a Rune Factory game. No big. It's the sort of feedback I'm looking for. I'd like it to be accessible to everyone. :D
Re: Precious Memories
Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2015 9:29 pm
by Robin
Yeah, the rest of the site functions well as an intro, so that will just help round it out! (Especially with the story arc section :D)
Re: Precious Memories
Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2015 12:46 am
by Mikari
Awesome! :D I knew it was a matter of time before you shrined RF4. It came out awesome ^^
Re: Precious Memories
Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2015 6:23 pm
by Crystal
@Robin: Woot! I like the sound of that.
@Mikari: Haha yeah. Seeing as I'm always talking about it on Twitter. Thanks Mikari! :D