I love the way you've taken her apart in so many different ways: persona, arcana, appearance, important relationships in the game. I feel like you've covered her as a character fully without overdoing it. It's very digestible! SMT has a lot of symbolism and fun things to pick apart as a player, so these kinds of shrines are really fun for me. I'm super glad to see Yukarin get such a spot-on shrine~! And I really love the way you've written it out to show that she isn't a bitch, she's just a girl who speaks up for herself and what she believes in. :)
(I will second what Snow said, it might help to add some contrast between your background color and your font by making your font a darker shade of pink. It is really hard to read on my monitor!
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