I don't know anymore what all I've talked about in the chat while you were still working on this, but I thought I'd leave you a visitor's comment too.
I really like the placement of the headings in this one aaaah the red smudge!! XD /rolls around in pretty red shades
What I like most about this shrine is getting to know not just about Nyreen, but also Aria and the relationship they share, past and present!
Omega's Talons, The Pirate Queen, and Ajutants are such strong pages! The different sections of your recent works I've read really blend into each other and make visiting your shrines an adventure; the visitor moves back and forward on the timeline while piecing together the events through thematic overviews. I love emerging from your shrines with the full picture. <3
Chasseresse - Nyreen Kandros (Mass Effect)
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Re: Chasseresse - Nyreen Kandros (Mass Effect)
Aw, thank you Lethe! It's always nice to have comments like this, means a lot! :)
You really flatter me in saying my shrine is a bit like an adventure! *_* I never thought of it that way but I suppose I do try to move through their life and events thematically... neat. XD I think this site is unique in that it does focus a lot on Aria as well. I don't think you can have Nyreen without her, Aria's influence on her is so great. I actually was really tempted to create an Aria shrine as well after working on this initially. It's on my to-do list, so maybe in the future I'll get around to it.
Thanks again! <3
You really flatter me in saying my shrine is a bit like an adventure! *_* I never thought of it that way but I suppose I do try to move through their life and events thematically... neat. XD I think this site is unique in that it does focus a lot on Aria as well. I don't think you can have Nyreen without her, Aria's influence on her is so great. I actually was really tempted to create an Aria shrine as well after working on this initially. It's on my to-do list, so maybe in the future I'll get around to it.
Thanks again! <3
- Laura
Genrou.com, Dramata.org & All-Blue.org
Genrou.com, Dramata.org & All-Blue.org
Re: Chasseresse - Nyreen Kandros (Mass Effect)
Ah, I thought commented on this previously, but I must have missed it! I apologize for the late comment!
First impression was great though. I admire the layout a lot. The color scheme is great, and I really love the enlarged first letter. The whole thing leaves a very novel-like impression! It's great! I really like how you've written about the game, the glossary is awesome, and I love the focus on Nyreen and Aria. Also the iconsssss. As someone not familiar with the character or game (really, I should be though), it was easy to follow and really enjoyable.
First impression was great though. I admire the layout a lot. The color scheme is great, and I really love the enlarged first letter. The whole thing leaves a very novel-like impression! It's great! I really like how you've written about the game, the glossary is awesome, and I love the focus on Nyreen and Aria. Also the iconsssss. As someone not familiar with the character or game (really, I should be though), it was easy to follow and really enjoyable.
Re: Chasseresse - Nyreen Kandros (Mass Effect)
Aw, thank you Megan!! :) A late comment is always welcome, it's nice to see new feedback! ^_^ I'm really glad you enjoyed visiting the site. I love Mass Effect so much and the Omega DLC was one of the last additions to the original trilogy to come out... I had always wanted to know what a female turian would look like so I was really thrilled that they finally decided to reveal one. :D She isn't in the game for too long so it was a bit easier to make a shrine for her than one of the major characters (though I'd still love to eventually make a shrine to Garrus one day). <3
Thanks for taking the time to visit and comment, it's appreciated!! <3
Thanks for taking the time to visit and comment, it's appreciated!! <3
- Laura
Genrou.com, Dramata.org & All-Blue.org
Genrou.com, Dramata.org & All-Blue.org