I love the layout! It's so vibrant! I think its a great contrast to Namine who always seems so somber to me. I think the time line is particularly helpful too!
This makes me want to try and get through Chain of Memories again! ;w;
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Wow, you've done it again, Sam~ You've really put everything in ;D Love the timeline *____*
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@Cherri: Aqua is my favorite Kingdom Hearts character and I'm really excited to write about her. I hope you will like her too. :) And I'll be waiting for the day you shrine something from the series for sure!
@Snow: Thank you! I was kind of worried it was an odd color combination for her (it really reminds me of the beach or something lol) but I think you are right. My previous layout was a light gray and it just made her look even more washed out. You should play CoM again though!
@Mayumi: Thanks, dear~ I'm waiting for you to make your site now, too. ;)
@Snow: Thank you! I was kind of worried it was an odd color combination for her (it really reminds me of the beach or something lol) but I think you are right. My previous layout was a light gray and it just made her look even more washed out. You should play CoM again though!
@Mayumi: Thanks, dear~ I'm waiting for you to make your site now, too. ;)
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@Samantha: She seems great and I love her clothes. <3 So I figure I'm partially there. I will parade around with it, when I do it of course. I'm kind of excited.
;o; *** pew! pew!
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I'll keep an eye out for it. :3Cherri wrote:@Samantha: She seems great and I love her clothes. <3 So I figure I'm partially there. I will parade around with it, when I do it of course. I'm kind of excited.
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Oh, yay! This website is pretty neat! :D Congratulations on making it! :) Very detailed.
My only problems with the site are aesthetic-related. I notice you like putting spaces between your text a lot, and I feel like it makes your website a little hard to read. That, coupled with the widths of your columns, make the content look squished together.
Other than that everything is fine, though. :)
My only problems with the site are aesthetic-related. I notice you like putting spaces between your text a lot, and I feel like it makes your website a little hard to read. That, coupled with the widths of your columns, make the content look squished together.
Other than that everything is fine, though. :)
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I like to use space too between my text! for some reason it makes it more attractive and less cluttered :x i dunno!! i just like it better but it may just be sisterly space bonding or something xD
now i have to add namine to axel's shrine...and saix if i havent already. hmhm
now i have to add namine to axel's shrine...and saix if i havent already. hmhm
please know that i am yours to keep, my beautiful girl.
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I agree with Megan cause it is pretty, (PADDING IS AWESOME! SPACE IS AWESOME! WEBMASTERS PAY ATTENTION!) but I can see where Jo is coming from, too. It does kind of run together if you're tired, or looking at the page from afar. I think this can be fixed one of two ways: 1) Increase the space between paragraphs by a couple pixels or so, making it very clear where new paragraphs begin, or 2) Indent the first line of each paragraph by two pixels. That will eliminate the illusion that paragraphs are running together.
Hope that helps. Less tl;dr: I didn't see a problem myself, but I can see how someone would.
Hope that helps. Less tl;dr: I didn't see a problem myself, but I can see how someone would.
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Thanks for the advice, everyone. I will keep that in mind for the future. I never really noticed a problem (obviously), but like Todd said, I guess I can see where someone would have an issue. I'll try increasing the space between paragraphs and see if that helps. :)