Skeleton Grin - Jack Skellington

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Re: Skeleton Grin - Jack Skellington

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@Chibi - thanks so much!! I'm glad you like everything. Ill go back and try to find those typos! I get so antsy when I'm making sites that sometimes I skip over typos without even realizing it haha thanks for letting me know! And I'm glad you enjoyed the read!!

@Crystal - thank you!!! I wanted to make sure I included some of his other roles to really understand his character in every version!!
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Re: Skeleton Grin - Jack Skellington

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This is awesome :D Jack rocks ^_^
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Hey Megan! I'm reading through your shrine and I really like it! I can only reiterate what everyone else has mentioned, lol! The splash screen is so adorable and I love how you talk about Jack in the movie and in the game, too. I've only played KH1 so the other information is new to me. (And I think it's weird that in the later games they have him dress as Santa again!! But that's what people know so I guess they wanted to do it.) I didn't even know he had his own game, whoa!! Amongst a bunch of other things, like the movie being based on a poem. I really love the fact you linked the poem so I got to go read it, that was really cool. :)

It's written really straight forward and I appreciate that! I did catch a couple typos. For Santa Claus, there should be no "e" at the end of Claus. In the first paragraph (welcome paragraph), you're missing the "d" at the end of dedicated.

So many things I am enjoying! Thanks so much for sharing! It's great. :3
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@Mikari - Thanks so much!! :D

@Destinie - Glad you like it!! I am so happy to hear all of the positive feed back on the splash page! I didn't expect it to be a big hit!! Yeah, the poem was something new I learned when I got my DVD version of The Nightmare Before Christmas and it was played in the extra section with Tim Burton saying it. It was really interesting ! Thanks for pointing out those typos, I fixed them! How embarrassing that I spelled Santa Claus wrong x_x;;; Oh well. Thanks again! <33
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Good job! Tee hee the splash page is adorable.
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Thanks Dubiousdisc !! :D I appreciate it!
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