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Rock Steady

Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 12:35 pm
by Destinie
Rock Steady- Probably one of my smallest shrines. I'd love some feedback on anything I can elaborate on or improve.

Re: Rock Steady

Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 12:47 pm
by Todd
+ I love your tone and voice on this site. It's very light and fun, which is appropriate for a site to a Nintendo character, specifically one as fun and silly as Darunia.

+ Your analysis topics are interesting and very informative. I liked reading about the Sages, and how music is important to Darunia.

- I think something on Darunia's appearance would be interesting to read. You've covered the appearance of Gorons, but Darunia has a strong look, even apart from them.

- The header and link text colors are a little dark on the layout. A brighter color might look a little better.

Re: Rock Steady

Posted: Mon Jul 29, 2013 10:16 am
by Cherri
I'm looking over it. I plan to review. In fact I typed one out but since I'm sleepy it was bad. I'll try again when I'm fully awake. Place holding, I guess.

But so far,
I'd like to see something on Darunia's appearance. You covered the others but not him.
It needs a link to Her Majesty (Yes, it's possible for me to pick on you early in the morning.) :heart:
Headers do seem a bit dark. Maybe orange like the block quotes...wait that is for the mini headers. Maybe a red? Or lighter color.
The links stick out, so I can find them. I like that.
If possible concept art of the Gorons. I think it might add to it like "This is what they came from." Or maybe a picture of their home, to see how their culture decorates.
And I really like how you did some figuring on where his name came from as I pronounce it "Dar-rune-ya" even though it's wrong because of that "I". Guess it's just one of them silent ones to me.

Re: Rock Steady

Posted: Mon Jul 29, 2013 4:21 pm
by Kibumie
I honestly think it was a great read! I honestly have not played any Zelda games, but the narration was clear and very informative. :blush: :heart: :music: :music2:

The youtube video is not available to view anymore. I have the same problem with my shrine that I have to fix as well. :ack2:

Re: Rock Steady

Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2013 10:24 am
by Destinie
Ah, thanks for your feedback!

@Todd Thanks! I'll need to think of something to write about his look. Hmm~

@Cherri I will add you when I can! I am so excited about "Her Majesty"! And I do have the Hyrule Historia so I can definitely do some scans. (Unfortunately, not a lot of Darunia artwork. Sob sob)

@Kibumie Ah! Thanks for letting me know! I'll probably just remove it since I have a link to download the wav.

Re: Rock Steady

Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2013 12:23 pm
by Cherri
Of course, no worries. ^-^ I was pretty upset that there isn't a lot of concept art for the gorons and zoras. Good luck. <3